Hmmm. I can see how it is still a work in progress.

[ This song is...unkind, to put it mildly, and there's a hint of not-quite-disapproval in the noise she makes before forming words. ]

I can't tell if you're punching up or down in regards to the, ah, subject of your work. Nor what sort of response you expect to it once it's done. Unless it's simply for your own private amusement?

[ ...It's no 'Burn, Butcher, Burn', basically. ]